Mostly good, but there were some parts in poor taste

Captivating, until I got to Jeremy’s letter. I thought the way the narrator read it was unprofessional and rude. I used to do transcription (commercial, not legal) and we would edit the transcription slightly for clarity and readability, and because we didn’t want to make anyone seem stupid.
We already know about Jeremy’s intellectual capabilities, so reading the letter as written is unnecessary. Kind of a duck move.